Monday 11 February 2013
French homework
Hey guys. I have to finish my stupid French homework for Thursday. It's a story about a girl who wants to save the last forest on the planet. It takes place in the future with floating chairs and self producing oxygen. It's taking en way too long to finish this story!
Thursday 31 January 2013
Broken by Heather Krichhoff
Tonight, under the shimmering stars, she will rest,
For Eternity,
Never again will feel helpless and lonely,
Not will she be broken,
Forever she was silenced,
Never again will they hear her laugh, nor see her beautiful smile,
Because they had silenced her,
Ended her short life,
Brought those she loved to tears,
Wondering why her,
Why would they do this?
She was full of life and joy,
Now she is buried deep in the ground,
With a gravestone,
Those she loved will always cherish her memory,
Never forget her,
Never say good-bye in their hearts,
They will be heartbroken,
But they can now rest knowing she wasn't,
Even is it breaks them,
But one day,
They know they will be able to meet her once again,
Until then, she will be always remembered.
For Eternity,
Never again will feel helpless and lonely,
Not will she be broken,
Forever she was silenced,
Never again will they hear her laugh, nor see her beautiful smile,
Because they had silenced her,
Ended her short life,
Brought those she loved to tears,
Wondering why her,
Why would they do this?
She was full of life and joy,
Now she is buried deep in the ground,
With a gravestone,
Those she loved will always cherish her memory,
Never forget her,
Never say good-bye in their hearts,
They will be heartbroken,
But they can now rest knowing she wasn't,
Even is it breaks them,
But one day,
They know they will be able to meet her once again,
Until then, she will be always remembered.
Wednesday 30 January 2013
Chocolate lab review
I think that this poem is about Heather's dog. I like the way it was written and the feelings that she feels are written so simply.
I give this poem 3 stars out of 5.
I give this poem 3 stars out of 5.
Chocolate lab by Heather Kirchhoff
Outside in a pen
Caring and playful
Old and not well
Always mine.
Review will be posted in the afternoon
Caring and playful
Old and not well
Always mine.
Review will be posted in the afternoon
Tuesday 29 January 2013
Campfire review
Heather told me that this poem was simply about a campfire, but I believe that it's about something more. I think it's about our problems, how they develop and how they are silent. This is a hidden meaning, that maybe Heather did not intentionally write it.
I give this poem 3 out of 5 stars.
I give this poem 3 out of 5 stars.
Campfire by Heather Kirchhoff
It sizzles and pops,
Flames bursting to the tree tops.
Smoke swirling all around,
Silent as a ghost making no sound,
Seeking no stops.
Flames bursting to the tree tops.
Smoke swirling all around,
Silent as a ghost making no sound,
Seeking no stops.
Monday 28 January 2013
Magical review
I just read and posted Magical by Heather Kirchhoff. I really enjoyed the fluency of the poem. I believe that this poem is about a goddess rising to her kingdom. I give this poem 3 out of 5 stars.
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